Dessy Peruanti
A320090033
Discourse Class A
1. What kinds of cohesion are used in the text and explain the meaning each comprehensively!
Answer:
Kinds of cohesion are used in the text are:
- Substitution according to Michael Halliday and Ruquaiya Hassan (1976) is the replacement of a word (group) or sentence segment by a ‘dummy’ word.
- Reference according to Michael Halliday and Ruquaiya Hassan (1976) is the act of referring to a preceding or following element, deals with semantic relationship.
- Conjunction according to Michael Halliday and Ruquaiya Hassan (1976) is a relationship which indicates how the subsequent sentence or clause should be linked to the preceding or the following (parts of the) sentence.
- Lexical Cohesion according to Michael Halliday and Ruquaiya Hassan (1976) does not deal with grammatical and semantic connections but with connections based on the word used.
- Ellipsis according to Michael Halliday and Ruquaiya Hassan (1976) is the omission of a word or part of a sentence is closely related to substitution.
Analyze sentences in the text:
Paragraph 1
An article in Campus magazine
entitled “Publics Participation For Education” by Miftakhul Khoiri presents the
first school Taman Siswa built by Ki
Hajar Dewantara. (1) Education paradigm is growing in Indonesia to
fulfill the sprit of education these days. Citizens should get competent
education. (2) Education is responsibility by government and the side of
private sector individual and group. (3) Because of limited cost, the
government opens the opportunity for public to participate and develop business
education such as; building opening schools, courses, or skill education with
facilities more complete and better than government schools. (4) The Supported
by complete and good facilities make this school rather expensive because it
also promises the good management on its education.
1. Education paradigm is
growing in Indonesia
to fulfill the sprit of education these days.
~The word ‘education’ refers to lexical
cohesion that is repetition.
2. Education is responsibility by
government and the side of private sector individual and group.
~ In the sentence contain word
‘and’ which refers to the conjunction addition information.
~ The word “individual’ and ‘group’
refers to lexical cohesion that is antonymy.
3. Because of limited
cost, the government opens the opportunity for public to participate and
develop business education such as; building opening schools, courses, or
skill education with facilities more complete and better than government
schools.
~ In the sentence contain word
‘because’ which refers to the conjunction causality.
~ Then in the sentence contain
word ‘and’, ‘or’ which refers to the conjunction addition information.
~ In the sentence also contain lexical
cohesion that is hyponymy business education such as; building opening
schools, courses, or skill education with facilities more complete and better
than government schools.
4. Supported by complete and good facilities make
this school rather expensive because it also promises the good
management on its education.
~ In the sentence contain word ‘and’ which refers to the conjunction
addition information.
~ In the sentence contain word ‘because’ which refers to
the conjunction causality.
~The word ‘it’ refers to substitution of school.
Paragraph 2
(5) Indonesia
has pesantren as education system (Islamic
boarding house models). (6) It is classified into two models: First
Traditional, it does not collect the payment from the students and students can
stay and study freely. (7) They study about Islamic science for the sake of
individual and public. The traditional pesantren
still be one choice by our society under class social. (8)Second, Modern pesantren collects the payment of the
students because it gives more ability and knowledge for students. (9)They do
not only study about Islam but also other sciences like Biology, Mathematics,
Economics, Physics, Language and Art. They are prepared to face the era that
always changes.
5. Indonesia
has pesantren as education system (Islamic
boarding house models).
~In the sentence the word “pesantren” have a
reiteration which include synonymy part because pesantren synonymy
with the phrase Islamic boarding house.
6. It
is classified into two models: First Traditional, it does not
collect the payment from the students and students can
stay and study freely.
~ The word ‘it’ in above sentence is an anaphoric that is
references which mean pesantren. And, ‘it’ also repetition of anaphoric
references which mean pesantren.
~ In the sentence contain word ‘and’ which refers to the conjunction
addition information.
~ Then in the sentence contain
word ‘students’ refers to the lexical cohesion that is repetition.
7. They study about Islamic
science for the sake of individual and public.
~ In the sentence contain word ‘and’ which refers to the conjunction
addition information.
~ The word “individual’ and
‘public’ refers to lexical cohesion that is antonymy.
8. Second, Modern pesantren collects the payment of the
students because it gives more ability and knowledge for
students.
~ In the sentence contain word ‘because’ which refers to
the conjunction causality.
~The word ‘it’ refers to substitution of pesantren.
~ In the sentence contain word ‘and’ which refers to the conjunction
addition information.
9. They do not only study about Islam but
also other sciences like Biology, Mathematics, Economics, Physics,
Language and Art.
~ Pronoun ‘They” in this sentence is anaphoric
referring to Biology, Mathematics, Economics, Physics, Language and Art.
~ In the sentence contain word ‘but’ which refers to the conjunction
shows the contrary between two clauses.
~ The sentence also contains lexical cohesion that is
hyponymy that is sciences like Biology, Mathematics, Economics, Physics,
Language and Art.
~ Then sentence contains word ‘and’ which refers to the conjunction
addition information.
Paragraph 3
(10) Without being realized the friction could be happened
from motivation of organizer and management of existing education. (11) To get
the good education with their equipment of facility they perform forced the
citizen get dealing with power of bargain and faces the reality of expensive
school and that also is for rich man children. (12) Poor people who have not
the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal education. (13) Government
and private sector individually and group have big homework to repair their
education inspect that aims on making organization of education.
10. Without already realized the friction that could be happened
from motivation of organizer and management of existing education.
~ The sentence contains word ‘and’ which refers to the conjunction
addition information.
11. To get the good education with their equipment of
facility they perform forced the citizen get dealing with power of
bargain and faces the reality of expensive school and that also
is for rich man children.
~ The word ‘they’ in this sentence is kataphoric from the
word “citizen”
~ The sentence contains word ‘and’ which refers to the conjunction
addition information.
12. Poor people who have not the purchasing power to
bargain they will lose their formal education.
~ The word ‘they’ and ‘their’ refers to reference
pronoun that is ‘Poor people’.
13. Government and private sector individually
and group have big homework to repair their education
inspect that aims on making organization of education.
~ The word ‘their’ refers to reference pronoun that
is ‘Government and private sector’.
~ The sentence contains word ‘and’ which refers to the conjunction
addition information.
~ The word ‘education’ refers to lexical cohesion that
is repetition.
~ The word “individual’ and ‘public’ refers to lexical
cohesion that is antonymy.
Paragraph 4
(14) I agree with the writer who
says that about publics participation for education is importance. (15) He says
that the education not only managed by government, but also the society has
contribution to build education together, about how they create good education,
both the facilities, system and soon. The government should think that all the
society level can enjoy education reasonably. (16) Moreover, to get good
education with equipment of facility they perform to force the citizen get the
power of bargain and faces the reality of expensive school and that also is for
rich man children. (17) I think that the middle society should optimalize
brilliant brain to be able to compete with others. (18) The writer says that
the poor people who have not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose
their formal education. (19) I think that this statement is true. (20) The
government and the private school should really provide scholarship for the
students who have competence to enjoy education.
14. I agree
with the writer who says that about publics participation for education is
importance.
~ The pronoun “I” reference
to summary’s writer she is Fitri Nurwiyanti.
15. He says that
the education not only managed by government, but also the
society has contribution to build education together, about how they
create good education, both the facilities, system and soon.
~ The pronoun “He” reference
to the writer the article he is Miftakhul Khoiri.
~ The word ‘education’ refers to lexical
cohesion that is repetition.
~ In the sentence contain
word ‘but’ which refers to the conjunction shows the contrary between two
clauses.
~ The sentence contains
word ‘and’ which refers to the conjunction addition information.
16. Moreover, to get good education with
equipment of facility they perform to force the citizen get the
power of bargain and faces the reality of expensive school and
that also is for rich man children.
~ The sentence contains word ‘moreover’ which refers to the
conjunction addition information.
~ The pronoun “They” reference to the government and
private sector.
~ The sentence contains word ‘and’ which refers to the conjunction
addition information.
17. I think that the middle society
should optimalize brilliant brain to be able to compete with others.
~ Pronoun ‘I” in this sentence is anaphoric
referring to summary’s writer she is Fitri Nurwiyanti.
~ Pronoun ‘others” in this sentence is anaphoric
referring to citizen.
18. The writer says that the poor people who have
not the purchasing power to bargain they will lose their formal
education.
~ The word ‘they’ and ‘their’ refers to reference
pronoun that is ‘The poor people’.
19. I think that this statement is true
~ Pronoun ‘I” in this sentence is anaphoric
referring to summary’s writer she is Fitri Nurwiyanti.
20. The government and the private
school should really provide scholarship for the students who have competence
to enjoy education.
~ The sentence contains word ‘and’ which refers to the conjunction
addition information.
~ The word “government’ and ‘private’ refers to lexical
cohesion that is antonymy.
~ In this sentence also have Ellipsis that is
the word “